‘I don’t look entertained, not as entertained as I will be when you get caught, in any case.’
She pursed her lips into a small smile, careful not to allow the amusement to permeate her tone once more.
‘So if you don’t want to see that unapologeticlook of pure enter- tainment on my face I suggest you tell me what’s going on, so, you know— I can do the big sister thing. Help you through it.’
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Silence blanketed the air around them for a few moments, then his lips parted and the sigh that escaped was an admission of defeat.
'Do you remember the gift Grand-mère gave me for Christmas?’
Oh, indeed, the silver necklace that he had complained about because it was girlish, but nevertheless wore because he adored his Grand-mère enough to.
It was a challenge, knowing he would take the bait. His eyes were almost hungry for what was written on paper. Who was she to deny him such a thing? She was the one that held the resources unlike her nephew.
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'All right.’
It was difficult to restrain his єηтнυѕιαѕм, and by the time he had retrieved the book from the shelf he was grinning from ear to ear. Giddiness made his tongue too loose for his liking.
'Thank you so much. I was about ready to volunteer to clean your toilets without magic.’
scratching her ear gently for a moment, she takes on a contemplative expression, eyes alternating from the BOOK she holds in her hands, to the BOY who is currently expressing the need to borrow the book. A PEDANT though she is, she is a far cry from the selfish information-hoarder the other houses labeled the Ravenclaws to be. A decidedly resigned smile resting upon her lips, she holds out the book.
”You owe me, Weasley —— I planned on rereading that for the Potions test tomorrow, though I suppose I could survive with a few of my notes.”
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He hesitates for only a split second before his hand darts out to receive the coveted tome. It’s all he can do to not do an embarrassing victory dance.
As his hands turn the book from front to back, lips stretch into a genuine smile, one that makes the corners of his eyes crinkle, eyes themselves almost closing; a raw expression of ѕιηcєяιту rarely revealed in the face of those whom he doesn’t consider a close friend.
'I could h u g you right now, but that would be awkward.’
❤: You’re doing amazing, we can always improve but every RP I read of yours is a joy.
ASDFGHJKL HI FRIEND thank you so much for sending this same goes to you i love your rapunzel and your writing like omf how does she pls take your time writing bae you can take a thousand years and i’d still be waiting
I figured a small ‘improvement meme’ would be a fine idea for RPers looking to brush up their skills and topple weaknesses, so here it is. Feel free to use the symbols or go for a more in depth response. Yes, you can send any of these to me too.
☢: You need to work on character responses, they tend to be bland.
✄: Your RP responses are really short/ could have more effort put in!
Σ: You’re messing up your punctuation here and there.
▼: Try to improve your spelling/Grammar
☯: Try to open up to more RPers, you’re great, but you’re missing out on a lot of potentially amazing RPs!
▲: Try to be more positive on yourself, there’s no reason to hate on yourself so much.
☠: You need to be more respectful.
✈: You need to improve your action sequences or reactions of characters.
❤: You’re doing amazing, we can always improve but every RP I read of yours is a joy.
✉: Message more RPers and get some more activity going please.
Ⓐ: Fight scenes could use more work.
❥: Romantic Scenes can be awkward, do your best to improve on this, and look out for common pitfalls!
☁: You might want to take another look at your character/characters and work on them a bit more. Every great character has a flaw or two.
✪: Joker *Whatever you feel needs to be addressed*
A laugh bubbles past pink lips. She is not mocking his frustration or anxiety, no. It is merely the fact that such language is not often heard coming from the mouth of her youngest brother. Quietly, she places herself beside him.
“Something the matter?”
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Tempted to childishly stick his tongue out but ultimately too anxious, he keeps his lips pressed for a few moments before responding with a groan and a mumbled affirmation.
